All Comments on 'The Other Smith Girl'

Hurry with the next installment.

Hot, quick, and nasty. My kind of sex with a slutty woman. Very good.

It started rather slowly but, I understand you needed to do the set up and you did it well.

I also vote for a next chapter.

Mike S

I gave up after page 1. A guest in a potential in-laws house does not ask potential sister-in-law if it's alright if he raises her sweater up to check out tatoos on her back. That's the type of writing I would expect from a horny inexperienced teenager.

the Ct. Yankee

This shit was crazy hot!!! Best story I've seen on here in a good minute. Love the twist at the end....

One of the most erotic stories I've read here in quite awhile...

Well done!

Yeah, don't sweat the negative stuff. As long as the positive feedback is more than the negative, don't worry! I loved it and am hoping you will continue with this intriguing tid-bit. More please!

The story is exceptional and a great stand alone. Leave it hanging... it's perfect that way! Thank you

finish it.

sweet story!

You are good. Mike from Texas

Thank you.

This is probably the most fantastic erotica, no, scratch that, the most amazing piece of writing I have ever read. (;

What ever happens ... there's always another door that opens! Hope the author decides to lead us thru to the rest of the story.