All Comments on 'The Other Tongue'

by demure101

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
nice tale

nice tale maybe less sex than most readers are looking for. this is a romance tale

after all and a good romance tale.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Nice.

I liked the story - it was well written and not overflowing with sex.I will be very happy to read more by this author..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Very nice

This is a very nice story and perfect for the Romance category

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Romance is the word!

DawnJDawnJalmost 8 years ago

As always, a lovely, sweet read, Demure! Well done, again! :)

SampkyangSampkyangalmost 8 years ago
Wonderful!

I would love another chapter or just one more page. Excellent writing! THANK YOU!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
only made it part of the way down page 1

The guy eats a vegetarian meal, then reads poetry... Sorry I"m not into gay. That was far as I could read... Next he is probably going to play soccer. Lol

WilCox49WilCox49almost 6 years ago
maybe I'm only nitpicking

I loved this story. But it starts with what I think is a major implausibility.

I'm pretty sure that any ongoing B&B, at least on this side of the pond, would run into tax and licensing issues if the owner were that sloppy about keeping records. I may be wrong. I have no firsthand experience. (And experience as a customer says all motels and B&Bs require prepayment, in fact want a credit card number, at registration, because the problem of guests who just leave without paying isn't all that rare. But there I'm reporting what I've seen and what I was told about why.)

Another really nice piece of writing, in any case.

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