All Comments on 'The Other Way Round'

It is clear to an experienced multilingual eye that this is a story conceived in Malayalam and written in English. That is not uncommon but one expects a reasonably well educated Indian to take the trouble of writing correct English. Or seek help if he is unable to do so. The alternative is not to write in English and thereby spare the reader!

Since Hubby has previously gifted Sweetie with highly-appreciated MFM threesomes, she now has the opportunity to return the favor and also help a good friend (soon to become Sweetie's new BFFF!) She also has the opportunity to demonstrate that women are not men, since Hubby firmly believes that FMF threesomes will be less efficient, due to the reduced amount of pecker-power! Silly boy!

The writing mechanics in this story are fine, despite the first ANON comment. If it was written by someone for whom English is a second-language, it is a STRONG second!

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