by DG Hear
Although I thought it should have been Romance.
I really did think it was a sweet love story.
DJ
Another good story and I hope to read many more from you. You have become one of my favorites.
Great story. While I haven't read any of your other stories, now would be a good time to start.
DG:
When I see a story with your name on it I have to take the time to read it 'cause I know it's going to be a lot better then good. You haven't disappointed with this one and you made this Horny 'ol Sailors heartstrings strum. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Ronnie W. pretty much said it all. It was a good beginning, an interesting middle, and a great ending. Thank you for a nice little read.
Beautiful... sensitive and sexy this really shows the value of including emotions and personal 'history' in a story. The characters are totally credible and, though it may be fantasy, it's one we can all identify with (or hope for!). Can't wait for more from your pen!
GW
That was a great Read! Seemed to draw me in. Thanks for doing it in one writing instead of making us wait to read it over a couple of day. You never disappoint. Great as always.
with high regards
An avid fan
with a good pace. I thoroughly enjoyed the story but to be honest, I skipped the sex bit - it wasn't really needed. Great work.
Well told story. I really enjoyed it and the romance was key. Wow!
I don't care where you put your stories in BDSM, Gay, Nonconsensual I will always read it if it's by DG Hear.
Your stories always have emotions that takeover my mind
Fantastic
Thank you
Well done, DG. My only criticism is that $50K is too small an amount from the slime bag!
You have a gift for writing true love stories. Thank you for sharing them with me.
i kept checking how old was the PI, DG cos he sure sounded and acted way too old for 38 and older than any 38 males i've encountered my whole life. I was actually hoping that the PI would be in his 50. Then his preoccupation of the age gap would make more sense. :) Needless to say, it's a wonderful story. Thank you
Well DG, whenever I see a story by you I make the time to read it because I know that your stories are always mind blowing. You have a gift for writing truly great romantic stories so why on earth did you classify this one as Erotic Couplings especially as there was no coupling until the very end and even then it wasn’t really needed! Thanks for giving us such a sweet love story - if only all love stories were so good!
One of the first stories I've read on Lit that actually worked on more than just a sexual level. Brilliantly written.
DG,
The title says all the problems I could have with this story. As always, a great story, Thank You for it!
All the best
John
The first time I voted I thought that I was giving you a five, but it was a one. Please disreguard my mistake. I enjoyed your skill in telling a good story, and I voted two fives to make up for my first vote.
Good Job.
I wish everyone could write stories like this story DG i Loved this one.
Texas, USA
Thanks for your story of the PI & The Hooker. What started out as a tragic, sad story had a beautiful ending.
Thanks again and keep them coming.
Ken
I think this is the best story here in literotica. It has a story and not just pure sex. Hope more stories like this will be written. (^_^)
I have ever heard of... but it's such a nice refuge story, away from depressing news or unsatisfying stories elsewere...
dat waz a great, heartfelt and touching piece. i loved every letter of it.
That was the first story on Literotica that made me cry time and time again. It was brilliant emotional writing, Thank you.
I loved it! the narrative seemed just the way a private eye would tell a story--no embellishment, just the facts, told in a logical sequence. By the time your detective had leased the car for the girl, you had me falling in love with her too! For all the simplicity of your story-telling, you got across the various moods of the detective: feeling sorry for the young mother, getting seriously involved with the little daughter, being embarrassed to admit his tender feelings, handling the collection of evidence for his clients in a matter-of-fact way, being assertive with the rapist, being reduced to child-like feelings by his sister as she assumed a maternal responsibility for her grown brother. For a simple tale, this had a lot in it. A tale well told!
I really enjoyed your story. One of the most likeable hookers I've read about! Thanks for sharing. [Gualterio]
I really liked the story and I will be looking forward to more.
They made me laugh and cry. There is no better recommendation for an excellent artist.
Thank you DG.
I have enjoyed most all of this author's stories but to me this one is probably the best one he has. It really made me feel good to read it.
You do so incredibly well when you introduce the kids into the mix.-
Of course that is partially due to the fact that I love kids especially mine so that is a good push button for me -
Your usual great tale although $50,000 sounds like a small amount to raise a small child with medical problems
love how it rolled along and evolved....just brilliant...a great story of love and making that bastard pay up...but he should have ruined him...too many assholes like him get away with stuff then pretend they are the great public servant while ripping people off...just like Trump....
Agreed the check amount would not cover the expenses of a child with medical problems. However, the amount was probably correct to have the scumbag agree to pay and also officially waive his parental rights. An amount more than this may have pushed the cost vs benefit analysis in the direction to fight it.
In the end Peggy gets some money to get out from under water and the scumbag is out of her and her daughter's life. Sounds like win-win.
How come these beautiful women the hero ends up with never have a boyfriend when they meet?.
A great little story that I very much enjoyed reading. Looking forward to reading more from this author.
What a great story of a first time hooker who found a generous loving man who rescued her and her daughter from who knows what kind of a future, then falls in love and they live happily ever after. 5++stars
A masterpiece. The secret is to be ready, willing and able to help and then act constructively upon it. The point is of course to be open enough to recognize the need. A story to read over and over again.
5*+++++
BJ
A little weak on the sex scenes, but otherwise I love the heartwarming story!