All Comments on 'The Package'

by Worker11811

Sort by:
  • 7 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Horrible Story & Writting.

This story reminded me of a bad version that you would find in a 1970's era Penthouse magazine.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Below your level of quality

The story is too "I" and "You" oriented and written in a very rushed and simplistic way. This is not up to the author's normal standards.

VictorDoUrdenVictorDoUrdenalmost 14 years ago
Didn't like it

So what exactly happened in this story anyhow...

Also the entire fur emphasis is kinda blue ballin.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
I like it!

Different, interesting, sensual, sexy, mysterious fantasy stuff. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Growning on me...

These stories about fur are beginning to grow on me. I enjoy the being engulfed by a morphing, giant, pleasuring being. And "VictorDoUrden", I recommend reading this author's "L'hotel Fourrure" (at least part 1). it definitely helps ease readers new to the idea into it

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
what the fuck

uh what the fuck was that? no offense but that was the biggest waste of time ever

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Good

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous