All Comments on 'The Package Ch. 02'

by steamoil

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steamoilsteamoilover 15 years agoAuthor
Sorry it's short again

To all those who commented that chapter one was too short - I'm sorry. I had already submitted this chapter before you commented. Be sure that I will make chapter three longer. And thanks for the feedback.

msjay123msjay123over 15 years ago
WOW......

THAT REALLY SHOCKED ME!! TOTALLY DIDN'T SEE THAT ONE CUMING. I HONESTLY DONT KNOW HOW I FEEL ABOUT IT LOL. I MEAN I LIKED IT BUT I JUST REALLY SHOCKED THE HELL OUT OF ME HAHAHA

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