All Comments on 'The Packages Ch. 03'

For the next package have the friend get the daughter and mother to eat each other's cunts after the son and father fill them with their cum.

This series has the worst dialogue I've Ever read. Not even porn film quality good. The first 2 were so so now this piece of Crap. BARF. I'm done reading this series.

1 star

DragonRider55

Nice to see the stories getting longer . Thank you for the fun read .

more of this is really needed. Maybe in chapter 4 mom and dad will tell each other how their days went with the kids. Would really like to hear from mom a lot. I'm sure that in the chapters to come they will be all playing in the same room as well.

Love it , on to the next one I hope . This make me want to hear how he fills her again. My first time with dad was great too . Wish that I could have gotten pregnant the first time . That didn't happen till I was 18.

this story was looking promising until this chapter no father could call their daughter those kind of names

Did you read this, Beaver?

Who the fuck talks like that? Holy shit.

Erotica? My dick shriveled reading this dialog. I was hoping you'd get better. Fuck that.

Where is (as a man on the radio would say) the rest of the story?

I was really enjoying this story until Jackson started calling his daughter as sorts of names. No way to show love to his daughter. Hope this is the last of that...

want to read about what happened between mother and son

I like the direction the story is taking. I like dirty talk but it is getting too raunchy. Looking forward to mom’s story! Will mom and daughter get together, a threesome, brother sister, double team, sloppy seconds, son lick dad’s cum out of mom/sister........ oh the direction this story can go! Thanks

The long form repetitive name calling was a little much once was good twice would have been ok but after that it just took away from what was otherwise a good story

You love your daughter but WENT TOO FAR with the abusive anal.

I still gave you 5 stars, but you took too long. You probably hurt your sweet inexperienced, loving daughter.

Still like the series.

What fucking will Mom get?

Good lead up mum ok with it now the name calling went over board and the rough anal turned me off a bit looking forward to mother and son like them better