All Comments on 'The Pact'

You are a gifted writer.get out of this genre and write for real!

Was she his sister the witches next summoned visitor ???

You left that part of the story hanging, she probably would have tried to follow him for answers as to what had happened to her body. Also I'm thinking goats have udders grouped at pelvic area, not rows of 6-8 teats along chest and belly. They are not like Canine, or like cats glands

You have a great talent. Do what you love but my god could you write a book without smut and make it big.

If you have I want to know.

Oh, first, apologies for the anatomy issues. I definitely should've researched goats a bit more. I did research on the time period but not really on the animal involved and that was a mistake.

For the anonymous comment - hello again! And, again, thank you for the comments. I have no published any non-smut. However, I have quite a few non-erotic stories in mind that I will write. However, they'll be posted under my real name rather than my pen name. And, unfortunately, I'm not really going to post a "Hey, by the way, I also write under XXXXXXX!" because I do have a private life that I don't want linked to my erotica. And, funny enough, I'm taking this weekend to write a short non-erotic sci-fi story that I plan to enter into a contest. And then, after that, publish as the first story on my non-erotic website.

I started writing erotica because werewolves and TF in general are a fetish of mine and I was just putting down a little short daydream I had. That turned into "The Change" and suddenly I had more and more ideas. I'd always wanted to write but could never come up with any good ideas but it all changed after that, back in... 2011? I write erotica because I enjoy it but also for the practice, honestly. And, I think it worked. Most people read erotica for the sex and don't focus so much on the story or writing style or grammar and that's allowed me to improve without being thrashed so hard.

May I recommend a few stories for you to read? "Legal Issues" is extremely well liked by people (probably the most liked alongside Layers) and contains my best writing, I think. "Testing Grounds" is a cool sci-fi werewolf story. And, "The She-Wolf" is a Victorian England take on "The Wolf Man" that was fun to write.

Thank you again for the kind words :) To be honest, writing non-erotic will be a breeze compared to this. It's quite difficult to write transformations in detail over and over again. And sex. Oh man. Seriously. Gets old fast trying to describe raw sex so much. Looking forward to not having to worry about either of those.

Wow, this was the best of animal-transformation and erotic pleasuring a story i have read in many a reading episode. It is detailed to where the read is along for the full ride, as I write TF stories as well, but this is an epic adventure!

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