The Palace Pt. 01

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AspernEssling
AspernEssling
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- "Nii-ce." she whispered.

Yasina began to stroke it, sliding her fingers the length of my tumescent shaft. She also began to tease my earlobe with her tongue. I swelled even harder, if that was possible.

I watched Bishkur take his lessons, as his mother masturbated me and licked my ear. It was incredibly exciting, and all too soon I felt the tightening in my balls. Yasina sensed it, too, from the tension in my body. She reached her other hand around, and pulled my silk trousers back up to cover the head of my cock.

The Prince's lesson continued, undisturbed, as only a few feet away I had one of the most incredible orgasms of my life. My ejaculation was so powerful that it made my knees tremble. I shot jet after jet of seed, and the Empress continued to slide her hand up and down my shaft between each eruption.

- "Mmm ..." she murmured, next to my ear.

She let go of my organ, finally.

"Keep watching." she whispered. "I will have Nanka get you a clean pair of trousers."

And she left me there.

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Comentarista82Comentarista82almost 2 years ago

You created lots of intrigue and mystery with this story with how Yasina noticed Carruch, whom you then tied to be Yasina's son's double. However, I don't get Yasina's interest in him through the interview and in doing what she did while her son attended tutoring. I will read more to see where this goes, but it's certainly one of your more mysterious offings. 5

JasmijnJasmijnalmost 3 years ago

I love this story!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
@goesgrunt

Dude, you need to see a shrink. Seriously.

priv8iiipriv8iiiover 6 years ago
Great Story!

I'm not sure sure why people believe they have the right to tell you how Your story should go!

I'm looking forward to reading all your stories!

GoesGruntGoesGruntover 7 years ago
Not So Much

Carrach has to know he's very likely to die soon. No doubt it'd ruin this story (or turn it into a very different one), but he should be looking to escape or at least assassinate Yasina. Because of his willingness to go along with it I find it hard to empathize with Carrach so I have little interest in what happens to him.

The first two chapters left me feeling like the whole story would be Carrach blundering thru and getting used, in bed and out, by the disgusting skank Yasina. The story is probably more than that, but if Carrach doesn't grow a backbone very early on I'd be hoping he dies instead of survives.

The emperor is an idiot too. Once he became ill he should have had all but a chosen successor executed along with their mothers. Allowing them to fight it out after his death is a lousy way to run a country.

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