All Comments on 'The Paladin and The Healer'

by RaginCajun50

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TJSkywindTJSkywindalmost 8 years ago
I was worried at first

The same word forest used twice in the first sentence. But even with the small errors here and there, I found the story and the characters engaging, and little twists here and there to keep the expected ending worth the conclusion. Well done! Thank you for sharing. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Beautiful

And thank you for not dwelling too much on the "forced separation" trope. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

I LOVED IT!!!

OliviaMOliviaMalmost 8 years ago
Well done

What a sweet little story! I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Great, I'm a sucker for happy endings.

lonecrowlonecrowalmost 8 years ago
Lovely

Sweet sweet love story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Excellent

This well written story stands alone or could be the foundation for a series. A pleasure to read, well done author and editor.

asjahstrinaasjahstrinaalmost 8 years ago
Loved it

Captured their emotions well and in a realistic pace . Love a romantic happy ending .

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Wonderful story. I loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More!

Read one, then another, then had to read them all. Marvelous! Please do write more.

BAnde53507BAnde53507almost 6 years ago
I Love A Happy Ending

Got a bit syrupy at the end but I loved it just the same. Five stars for leaving me feeling so good.

P.S. I love Ironhoof. He should get his own story.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 1 year ago

Couldn't ask for a happier ending as they ride off into the sunrise lol. The story was a fun read and was written well. Thanks.

KnightofmindKnightofmind2 months ago

A noble tale indeed! Villains slain, damsels saver heros and maidens finding love and a bit of subtle divine intervention and even a noble, and irascible steed!

What a tale indeed!

Alright. I'm corney. So, sue me.

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