by RaginCajun50
The same word forest used twice in the first sentence. But even with the small errors here and there, I found the story and the characters engaging, and little twists here and there to keep the expected ending worth the conclusion. Well done! Thank you for sharing. 5*
And thank you for not dwelling too much on the "forced separation" trope. 5*
This well written story stands alone or could be the foundation for a series. A pleasure to read, well done author and editor.
Captured their emotions well and in a realistic pace . Love a romantic happy ending .
Read one, then another, then had to read them all. Marvelous! Please do write more.
Got a bit syrupy at the end but I loved it just the same. Five stars for leaving me feeling so good.
P.S. I love Ironhoof. He should get his own story.
Couldn't ask for a happier ending as they ride off into the sunrise lol. The story was a fun read and was written well. Thanks.
A noble tale indeed! Villains slain, damsels saver heros and maidens finding love and a bit of subtle divine intervention and even a noble, and irascible steed!
What a tale indeed!
Alright. I'm corney. So, sue me.