All Comments on 'The Panty Sniffer Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Twin score

Why did stop twin score love it it now a cliff hanger please continue it

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

I read every word of this offensive story that deserves to be in the fag section, or I'd rather say undeserves any section, just put this story back in the fag closet. Even though you said at the beginning of the story, if one finds it offensive to not read it. Weirdos like me arent happy unless we are offended. Ha ha, just kidding. I give it 5 stars!

hoppy154hoppy154over 8 years ago
great story until

loved your story all the way till you got the 2 guys to suck each other at that point you lost me and probably a good number of other male readers. WHY did you have to go ruin it by bringing that in didnt read another word after that so try again with another chapter or rewriting that one for us that not into that sort of thing had been giving 5 stars but for that one only 1 star

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Sensational

Ignore the words of these sad homophobes. Absolutely LOVE that you took the story in that direction. And love how tentative it was--the slowness of the father/son thing was great. Would love to see more of that, assuming there are to be more chapters. GREAT read so far--ALL of it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Ahhhh...a creamy finish!

Too bad about Daniel's reluctance to enjoy the delights of cream pie eating and some incidental cock and balls contact with his son, but perhaps in the future he'll be a convert to this wonderful pastime.

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

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