All Comments on 'The Pantyhose Stalker Ch. 02'

Stupid titles don't get read.

Up to your usual high standards.

Jon, you commented "Stupid titles don't get read" referring to the description "Having taken her daughter, the Stalker wants her daughter" rather than the title. One of the problems with Literotica is that it only allows a very short story description. I also I notice you posted on 30 Jan, the day the story was published so it must have piqued your interest. I always welcome constructive criticism but yours is not very helpful. I’m posting part 3 soon, hope you enjoy.

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Michele

I posting a comment in a rush... but I felt I owed a post after enjoying the storied. I am surprised that after 6703 views, only two comments were posted for The Pantyhose Stalker Ch. 02.

This was an interesting twist. The calculated Detective Mike Harris surprised us with his plan to pursue the daughter. I particularly enjoyed the ambiguous and complex responses from the victims, conflicted by their experiences - shocked probably but not at all unpleasant. I am not really into rape and non-consent situations but I definitely appreciated the transformation and seduction to a darker space with unexpected pleasure, hidden desires and lust by the victims - and also by their fascination and excitement in the recollection, possibly ashamed to wish for reliving some aspect of the experience, their guilty pleasure. The character development kept me going through. The first part was exciting and the second surprising. What next?

What role will the Detective female colleague play in the following part, how will the daughter handle knowing about about her mother's "predator"/attraction, will their experiences bring them closer? Will the daughter pursue Detective Harris and for what motif? Any more victims, who will be trapped then seduced? Will Harris manipulate and seduce more than one victim at a time? Too many twisted and kinky directions.

Thank you for the purely fictional intrigue. Looking forward to the next part for our enjoyments and fantasies.

D

wow is all i can say about your amazing story !!!......without a doubt the hottest story i ever read....loved the licking through the nylon...just amazing....keep up the great work cant wait to read more of your story !!

good job treating a slut like a slut.

Dear Michele,

Thanks for an intriguing chapter! I loved the daring risk that detective Mike took with the daughter, Nadine. I realize she is a seasoned slut and gave Mike lots of encouragement as they talked. But, even though he could see her sexual interests, to actually play around with her and then fuck the sweet, young bitch, seems to be extremely dangerous for him. The recording was an excellent idea, but Nadine may not care if she is exposed as a whore, if she really wants to Nail Mike for assaulting her mom. Can't wait to read the next chapter!! I must admit, I'm enjoying how Mike takes his prey and enjoys their pussys, getting them to listen for him and his big cock in return.

I bet the juice flowing out of Nadine's freshly-fucked pussy would be delicious to lick up!! Too bad I'm not on the floor of that car, cleaning out her lovely pussy. Yes, I'd clean off Mike's beautiful penis too. Can't let all that tasty juice (cum mingled with cunt secretions) go to waste. OK, so I'm a fucking, slutty, pussy-cleaning, cock-sucking and cock-licking bitch. At least I never assaulted a girl. Even though I love your story.

Love, sucks and fucks,

Bob

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nice, though if she goes to the police the DNA will now find a match, and the detective is fucked no matter what.