All Comments on 'The Party'

A little pig, yuck.

If it works for them ....... <br><br>

However the author brings up a very interesting observation at the end. Mary says "Well James, I not sure if I still can love you but I do love the control I have over you." And I have to wonder if a person who controls another person like this over time can really love them? They may love the situation and the control it affords them but can they really love the person? Humiliation and domination would seem to push out love eventually. Two people can be together for any reason they want, even if it is just by mutual agreement, but Mary's statement makes me think. For that reason alone the story had value to me.

TSIA

Sorry, not my cup of spunk.

I'll bet that if they were James they would have done the same thing. I for one would have taken the load eagerly if my wife offered her lover's spunk to me. Don't knock it if you haven't tried it.

Where have all the writers gone, long time passing...

don't want to read you any more. Three people cheated on John's wife. John, The whore and the wimp. I will help her pull the trigger NYMINUS

Author - get some professional help.

You really need help Bakecuckwimp.

But not this one. In fact, this one was so bad, I doubt I will read anything more with your handle. Whew....

it turned me on, my husband would never be cuckec but i would love to be able to that scene with someone else , maybe from the net to make the fantasy lol

i am sure john loved the surprise that would be a big part of it

This so called writer needs his head read.

She said it perfectly:I'm now sure if I can still love you (to her husband) but I do love the control I have over you. He knows what he has and he deserves what he gets. Nicely written story.

The problem with many of these cuck wimp stories is that the details that matter get little writing attention but the parts that shouldn't even be there get too much attention from the writer. It's as if the only reason they write the story is to have an excuse to get gay homo crap into the story outside of the gay male section where they know straight men won't read it. It's like their whole goal is just to get straight men to read some gay crap. Sorry but the gay crap of the husband eating the other guy's cum is not sexy at all to straight men. It totally ruins the vibe of the whole story. Here's a clue. What turns us on are stories where the wife is totally ravaged by a guy with a bigger cock or somebody who is younger and in better shape...and also happens to be great in bed. In other words, it is the straight sex that is better sex for her that turns us on. It is her totally letting go and enjoying totally hot sex that turns us on. For myself, I love to read stories where the wife describes how much better the guy is fucking her either during the sex or later when the other guy is gone...but I don't like the other guy acting disrespectful and I don't like the wife acting like she disrespects her husband or doesn't love him. It's a turn on when the story is one where the husband and wife love each other but they are sharing the experience of her enjoying better sex with another guy. One of the sexiest stories I ever read, the wife gets all sexy, makes a great dinner for the hubby, then straddles him on the couch, then after making out for awhile, tells him that in a week, she is bringing a guy home for dinner, then she is going to fuck the other gut in front front of him. The hubby is shocked but they talk about it and she assures him it is just sex, she still only loves him, but that she has read stories of this and watched some movies of it and the idea of looking into his eyes while a guy with a really big cock was fucking her turned her on to no end. So she said that for a week, the wouldn't have sex but they would talk about what it would be like doing this, and watch those movies she had bought and read some stories. Then they would do it the one time, and then talk about it. She said she really wanted to try it and if they both really liked it, they would do it more, but if he decided he didn't like it, they wouldn't do it anymore...but she did want to try it at least once. So they did it and the description was awesome. The husband was clearly able to tell that she was getting the best fucking she ever had, by this well hung stud. She would look into his eyes and tell him how good it was and describe all the reasons it was better. After words, in their bed, he told her that he could tell it was the best sex she ever had. She admitted that she knew he could tell and she said it turned her on to look into his eyes and know that he knew she was experiencing better sex with this other guy. She said she didn't know why, but it just turned her on be having the best sex of her life in front of her husband and to look into his eyes and see that he was aware of that fact. That he knew this other guy was going deeper into her than he could, stretching her more, and that his cock felt more intense in her. In the end, they decided to do it more. hat story was hot. Another one a guy set his wife up with a friend. Well he invited the friend...a real lady's man in college. to stay at their house every time he came to town for businesses which was once a week. He would go to bed each time and leave them alone watching TV saying he had to get some sleep for work the next day. Then he would sneak back out later to watch things progress between the two. It took months but eventually she made the decision to go all the way. They had worked up to it making out and stuff. Then after the first time on the couch, they would always go to the guest bedroom but he had made sure he could watch and hear from the window while standing outside on the back balcony. Then one day, she went to check on him after her first bout of sex that night in the guest room with the friend. She had went into the guest bedroom bathroom but it had a door to the hallway that she used to go check on her hubby. Not finding the hubby in bed, she noticed the open door onto the balcony. There she spotted her hubby peeking into the guest bedroom and thought her marriage was over because her hubby had found them out. She panicked and the hubby saw her standing there. He ran to her and quieted her so the friend didn't hear her. She pleaded that she was sorry but he shushed her. When asked, he told her that he had been watching them have sex for months and making out for months before that. She was shocked and wondered whey he never confronted her. He told her that it turned him on to watch her. They talked briefly and he told her that she should go back in there as the friend was definitely expecting more sex. The wife looked into his eyes with pleading eyes of her own and asked if he was really sure he wanted her to do that and he assured her that he did, that he loved watching how much more intensely she enjoyed sex with his friend. She assured her hubby that she loved him and that she would do what he wanted, stay with him or go to be with the friend for more sex. In the end, she was in bed with the friend but now she knew hubby was watching from the window and now could just make out that he was there. Now she spent a lot of time looking there when she could and looked right at him as she described how good the friend's cock felt. The friend of course thought it was her just talking to him telling him how much she liked it. He didn't know she was talking to her husband. Later in bed, she admitted to her husband that it turned her on more than she expected because she knew he was watching her have better sex with his friend than she had with him. She said she didn't know why but it turned her on that he was watching and that he knew he could never fuck her as good. It just made it more intense for her which is why she made sure to describe how much better the other guy's cock felt. As she said this, she had his cock in her hand and it throbbed and she said, "Ooooh, it seems somebody likes that." This is what makes stories really hot and worth 5 stars from me.

and thats what he wants - to be scorned - to be degraded - to be laughed at - to be humiliated to be less than worm shit.<P>

The jaded numbness is so deep - his libido so sordidly abused that there is nothing of value in his mirror to warrant living as a human anymore.<P>

So he tears himself down - how sad.

If you could take the time to rant as long as you did, then get off your ass and write a story your way.

will never forgive you for your Haitian 'trapped in the cellar' story.

i love to eat out my wife after she fucks other guys.

Because she has clearly demonstrated her lack of regard for her husband. So she's toast. Don't let the door hit you in your ass on the way out. Your silly ending is total bullshit.

It is unfair to read a cuck story and criticize the genre.

Only a real brain sick people can write such a crap!!!

I vote foe confrontation.

You are no kind of boss, you have sunk too deeply into the cuck writer swamp.

We had a friend that came to stay with us for two weeks and although he had fucked my wife many times before my wife went to bed with him every night for about an hour. We would go to our bedroom first to get undressed then get into bed and wait to see if we heard any sound from our kids then my wife would get out of bed and leave our room and go to his bed where he would be waiting naked My wife would climb into his bed and they would either have a 69 or he would fuck her or both.After she would come back to our room and sit on my face and rub her wet pussy all over my face then place her pussy right on my mouth and force his cum out right into my mouth.Next morning after the kids had gone to school we would all go back to bed and take turns fucking her.Great times were had by all.

whore wife and little boy who needs to grow up