by AtomicLove
The story gets twisted and convoluted, thus becoming boring and hard to follow. The scene at the gym is more aggravation. She wants a shower but all her clothes are dirty and sweaty. what's the point? Exhibitionist or not, there needs to be a better flow in the story than, "My clothes are dirty I'm going to the men's shower." It does not follow.
The use of "make due," is odd. Certainly no definition I'm aware of.
The stars keep dropping.
fun stuff...Lena's large breasts, seems she's not alone liking them, and getting herself off-good for her...!
What is it with the majority of the writers about their women have to have bald pussies. I for one think a full bush is sexy. If you want to do some trimming ( not shaving ) around the lips, clit and bikini line so be it. There are still a lot of readers out there like pubic hair. Please think of us once in a while.