All Comments on 'The Party at Lynn's'

it starts halfway through the night where is the beginnging of the story

Your stories are hot. Are you Lynn or a lynn wannabe?

Are tou Lynn or a Lynn wannabe?

Dear Sabine,

I think your work would be more effective with descriptions of the appearance (and motivations) of the characters. We don't know what any of them look like. We know that Jim is jealous but why are the other girls willing to get naked? Etc.

Good luck and thanks for you stories.

Loved it! Reminded me of a gangbang I attended...