All Comments on 'The Party Girls'

love it, please keep it going with a orgy between jay, the narrator [you], Thomas and tim. and how our heroines committed to being tim and Thomas's girlfriends.

jamz

We'-sa go tot he frat party

We no go to class

We got dressed up as girlies

We get-a fuck in the ass

We's a want-a the cocks all gushin

In-a da holes where we shit!

We's-a gonna be sissy-pansies

And dick-suckin' flits!

Interesting premise which started out well, then rushed through what little fragments of sexual activity are present and abruptly ends unfinished. As the author hasn't posted here since Jan 2015, I can only presume it never will be finished properly.

It might have been amusing if Emma and Jay were to show up at this event as each other - or presented in such a way that Jay is just plain M2F (but passable) while Emma is a girl pretending to be a boy (bound breasts, undergarments padded or stuffed with strap-on boy parts) pretending to be a girl (with deliberately fake-looking makeup and attire that look more like a drag queen than like someone living full-time female. Then let them presume that Jay is Emma is a real girl, while Emma pretends to be Jay, er, Jane in a clumsy dress or in some fetish costume like a French maid - speaking in a very clumsy fake voice.

Then watch the boys throw themselves at Jay thinking he's a real girl and thinking that Emma is a clumsy caricature of a drag queen. Maybe have her make them suck her fake dick for good measure.

Very nice... Loved it. So glad everyone had fun, I used to love frat parties...