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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Please decide if the PA is "you" or him, and whether you're writing in present or past tense! It's really off-putting!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Confusing

This is confusing as you jump between who is which role! Please stick with one point of view!

1suitedbi1suitedbialmost 7 years agoAuthor
Faceless comments

What is the use of faceless general comments?

At least have the decency to contact me so that a suitable response may be given.

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