All Comments on 'The Past Catches Up'

cant always fly north or south to escape their environment. TK U MLJ LV NV

Too wordy.

I cried, boo hoo hoo! Pass the tissues, sweetie.

;)

(Could have a bit more descriptive writing - I'm not sure what any of the characters look like. Winner of a story arc though.)

Brad had it all backwards but then most violent people will tell you that they (the victims) were asking for it... Another case of ugly duckling growing up.

Solid story, I was expecting a child back home.

But, you were too wordy! ha ha, reminds me of the movie Amadeus where the king tells Mozart that his music has too many notes!

Thanks again!

ttom

Thanks for writing. tom anon

a lot of shit goes on in colleges and many times it comes back to bite you in the ass years later....Assholes like Brad should have been charged with rape after drugging her...personally he should have been beaten and castrated for what he did..I expect many men and women leave college having been total jocks and whores then settle down....but I wonder just how many continue the same life style....probably more than we will ever know....perhaps that is why there are over 1 million abortions every year.....

Very often it is the guys who get bitten in the ass due to what they did while in college. This time it's the girl. However, in her defense, she was drugged at the time. Brad did not get half of what he should have gotten for organizing the gang bang. I wonder if Jerrold might have some silent and private intentions developing in his mind to finally get Brad's dick cut off (with no anesthesia of course) and then stuffed in his throat until Brad chokes to death on it?

5*

BJ