All Comments on 'The Payback Ch. 01'

Cut out watching the TV comedy acts, every four word being profane goes from being the shock value to disgusting. If all you can manage is profanity write on toilet paper and flsuh.

Too real - no turn on as it is too close to the truth for poor people in war torn regions - I read nonconsent for the deliciousness of being out of control. The bits between the couples themselves were lovely though.

"You are not to make any moments until told," Just how the hell do you make a moment...I thought that was all left to time...guess you should have proof read ...huh...