All Comments on 'The Pearl Ch. 04'

Excellent! Keep them coming please :) This series is very enjoyable

still going strong

Dragon love? Hahahahahahahahah....................for some reason cant stop laughing! Keep going,good stuff!

Yes, please keep it coming. This is a good story that is only getting better. I'm eager to see how Dakota fits into the world of Sebastian the dragon. And what of Chang? He seems to know more than he is revealing. And who's this other dragon? You have created a story that is just plain fun to read. With all the mystery and charm of an ancient legend, you leave me wanting to know more. So please get me the next chapter and the one after that and the one after that and so on.

hope to see more soon

Most romantic, sensual, bright, interesting, funny, clever, positive. Not much erotic. Please add some up. Can't wait to read the rest. Thank you.

I like dragons and I try to read any good stories that involve dragons. This qualifies.

Just a couple of suggestions though. One, pace yourself. Don't rush to create an erotic scene just because a commenter asks for it. You are the author. You decide when certain things happen. It is better to take your time and do things right than it is to rush and possibly make mistakes. The second suggestion is more of a request: longer chapters please.

Anyways, have fun writing. I look forward to what is to come.

Is she going to have good luck now that she knows him? Is that why she won that money from the lotto ticket? She doesn't seem to be so lucky with Chad though.

I'm really enjoying this story so far and looking forward to more :) the characters are fun and it's an enjoyable read !

Another good installment. I like how more and more factors keep popping up, lending depth to an already engrossing story. I admit that I would have liked a longer chapter, but I would also like more chapters; you only have so much time to write, so as much as I might want to say, “ZOMG NEED MOAR!!!11!” that sentiment is probably just a symptom of me being hooked on this story. I'll have to try to be patient as I wait for more, and until then, thank you again for a great story.

Enjoyable story, please continue.

I like the way this story is going along. Please keep it going.

Good, without being pretentious. Smart, without making itself arrogant.

Man I wish these chapters were longer -- your writing is great already, but this story seems like something you could publish if it were long enough.

Ugh, I've had one of those guys. He threw a bit of a fit, so I had to explain to him, in no uncertain terms, that one outing to a play did not mean we were a couple.

... it just keeps getting better and better!