All Comments on 'The Pearl Ch. 11'

the darker direction is most defiantly the way to go. It feels like it is about to take a new life of it's own and get back to the business of creating a truly mythical story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and more of this new darker path you have chosen.

yeah this is definitely darker than past chapters and a bit exciting actually, but way too short!!! dont know who i feel sorry for more, qiang or sebastion.

Wonderful and exciting new direction for the story and perhaps a bit of a wake up call for Chad. Maybe he won't be such a rat bastard any more now that he's seen himself in Ms World Arachnophobia.

This is darker...but so totally awesome!! Hopefully Qiang can save Sebastian before anything worse happens! And you did a great job with the "whore spider". She gives me the creeps!

Hopefully chapter 12 will be here soon ;-)

Xo, LilyArc

what a twist this is .....

Your work continues to draw me in - I can't wait for more :)

... well, at least a start. The new direction is incredible! There is real drama and so much potential in this story. Thank you yet again for your talent and your effort!

Jim