All Comments on 'The Pearl Ch. 13'

need moar faster...

I like that Dakota was able to speak with the river. And for now our little bird has become a hawk, at least for the sake of Sebastian. We know he will be a much better human person now. Qiang has proven himself! But what now? This chapter has ended on a happy note, no cliff hanger! Hurry w/the next chapter so I know what's happening hehe-he

This tale is a very well crafted weaving of old

and new. I'm enjoying it very much.

This has been a wonderful story thus far, keep writing;

So take your time

with your next chapter,all your charactors are growing in their spirits. Find the joy again in your own life & writing out of the sorrow. You've brought me much joy thus far through your Tale of The Pearl

Seriously great stuff. You write intelligently too, in which I delight. Quoting my favorite Shakespearean play was the icing on the cake.