All Comments on 'The Pearl Ch. 15'

by Thistlethorn

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good to see another chapter!

Another nice little extension to the story. Keep it up please.

Oh also, debt not dept :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Thank you!

I've been waiting. Please hurry with Chad's chapter.

MizTMizTover 12 years ago

You continue to surprise me w/every chapter. I thought this would be a make out session between Dakota and Sebastian, instead it was more about Quang and Chad. Nicely done!

As always I'll keep my eye out for the next installment.

catman71catman71over 12 years ago
in line with others

i enjoy the fact that story/plot takes precedent of the sex at times, and i do think that chad and Mingzhu might end up more than friends and that chad is most defiantly going to deserve a story of his own

SpeedySPSpeedySPover 12 years ago
An interesting complication.

Chad is an interesting complication. I'm glad it seems he'll continue to appear. I'm also glad you haven't dismissed the tension between Qiang and Sebastian. Where will you go next? I'm ready for more. Thanks for writing.

mokkelkemokkelkeover 12 years ago

who thought chad would be redeemable.

curious as to how the others will react to him once they meet him face to face.

waiting for the next update

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 12 years ago

I think that Qiang's insight that Chad is damaged rather than flawed is significant. I am glad that Chad will have someone to watch over him while he finds his way. This story takes interesting turns.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Chad and Qiang

You're turning some real asshole characters into fully fleshed people I can, if not agree with, understand as people instead of just being "the local scumbag".

It's very well done and shows good ability as a writer.

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