All Comments on 'The Peasant and the Crescent'

Obviously, a lot of work went into this. Thank you for that effort. That said, I don't read porn looking for anything that points back to RL politics, and this does. It is also written in a dense, as in thick to read through, manner. Paragraphs are too long. Use of unusual names is annoying in recreational reading. I tries three times to READ it and found myself skimming each time. Sorry, but this didn't work for me.