by smysecret
Why didn't the wife tell her husband she wasn't happy?
Writing o.k. but she needs to talk to her husband and strighten her life out or move on. Adultery is not the answer to anything and your heroes life is a shallow,selfish, hurtful way to live. Do unto others,ect.
Makes Americans really look like assholes.............Dino should kill his wife for drugging him first, then kill the arrogant American. Suck on an RPG you sick fuck.
You made sure the hero was a worthless asshole, the wife was a cheating whore and the husband was a clueless idiot.
Good luck next time.
sex was hot and the characters well developed.
I do find it ironic that an author from south Africa
... a state that had extremely close ties to the nazi Germnay and a TRUE racist govt for 100 years who make lectures / statements about American imperalism.
Let see American in the past 60 years has liberated/ or assisted in perserving their liberty of:
FRANCE LUXEMBURG BELGIUM GERMANY ITALY POLAND NORWAY FINLAND DENMARK LIBYA MOROCCO AUSTRAILA NEW ZEALNAD THAILAND INDONESIA INDIA JAPAN KOREA BELARUS UKRAINE ESTONIA LATVIA LITHUNIA CEZCH HUNGARY ROMANIA BULGARIA GREECE GEORGIA AREMNIA and all of the central asian 'STANSs
I'll admit: I am of two minds. Up to the post coital stage I liked the story very much, from that point on - I almost detested it. What a couple of ugly (internally) characters! Easily and coolly betraying a life long friendship.
with nasty comments. I guess they are perfect. At the end the jerk "friend" pretty much allows the husband to know what happened through his invasive changes on the computer. Bottom line: an awkward mix of a nice tale with very ugly characters
Perhaps a little unemotional. I felt sorry for Dino and sorrier for Donna. A mis-matched pair if ever there was one. But Conrad was a thoroughly despicable cad, preying on women, using them and discarding them. Anyone that would do what he did to a friends wife deserves the worst. That's why the ending to this was so bad. He just walks away, smug in his usage of Donna and thinking himself clever to have changed Dino's letter into a smutty message that he had taken his wife. All and all a really disgusting story.
Maybe Dino can show you how a sword can be mightier than a dickhead friend who fucked the wrong man's wife.