All Comments on 'The Perfect Affair'

by VelvetTipper

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
story

fantastic

walkingeaglewalkingeagleover 19 years ago
It's also the perfwect story!

VelvetTipper, has once again written a story that the passion and hot sex draw you in! I felt like I was there watching, feeling----I loved it! It's certainly got me fully excited!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Not enough imagination

While it was a very good story, there are other words to use besides "sex" all the time. It got to be very redundant after a while. Next time experiment with pussy, cunt, vagina,etc or if it's another french story perhaps chatte.

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