All Comments on 'The Perfect Gift Ch. 02'

by trailgirl262

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imharmless69imharmless69about 11 years ago
Excellent

Don't stop now!

Elron43Elron43about 11 years ago
Great Story!

Please keep them coming!

EdwardMidwestonEdwardMidwestonabout 11 years ago
Another 5

Two for two. You're batting 1000, trailgirl.

Oz1999Oz1999about 11 years ago
HOT!

You are doing a wonderful job of developing this story ... so fucking hot! You know how to build the anticipation. Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Very good story

Many women would like to help son's relieve stress during difficult times. most are afraid of a direct approach. The gift idea is excellent and can many benefits.

pokercouplepokercoupleabout 11 years ago
awesome buildup

Loving the build up. Keep it going and I can't wait to see how things develop.

idreamofjeanneidreamofjeanneabout 11 years ago

This story got me really worked up. Damn, I can just imagine me and my mom doing the same thing. Keep up the good work and please please include some anal in your next chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
what?

Please continue it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Please keep going

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
now Tyler's mother knows what's the best gift her boy can give her

it's a great big twatful of his creamy semen, straight from the boy's hot young balls

Corey2JustifiedCorey2Justifiedover 7 years ago
Good

Seriously? Would have been perfect if he took control at the end. By that I mean he masturbate her instead of her

Familyluv2114uFamilyluv2114uover 4 years ago
Dear God!!

So deliciously written girl lol

But seriously....this chapter was so intense I was taking so many breaks while playing with myself to enjoy it,(even thou it was only a page) but my horniness over took me and I was pumping myself along with them and came when they did! Honest engine haha. We're definately in need of a Chapter 03.

LegallySaneLegallySaneover 2 years ago

Another "cock tease" author.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please, please don't leave us hanging!!!!! Pretty please with sugar on top, please write another chapter and tell us more. It was an amazing story, you did a fabulous job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent second installment.

No loss of intensity building between participants, and likely even more!

Your timing is RIGHT ON and, as I noticed in other comments, has most readers fighting to continue matching yours and not going too quickly.

You have found your niche, please continue . . .

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

EXCELLENT TIMING!

Smooth run-up to dinner.

Controlled tensions with wonderful input, twice, from more than mildly interested third person.

Fantastic denouement with crescendo completion . . . To this chapter.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 1 year ago

Good story. Hope you continue to develop it. It is obvious from the coversation of the characters that they adore, respect and love each other both as mother and son as well as human. If the story continues, hopefully the author has the skill to express the fact that love has no boundaries. Only people have boundaries. To love, there is no such thing as forbidden, shame, guilf, self-loathing or jealpusy.

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