by darkstone57
Waiting for the next chapter! Need to know what happens next! Nice character development and definitely holds the readers interest. Keep the good work coming!
I love this story I can't wait to read more and see what happens.
and love your writing. Cannot wait to see what happens next.
The story and the writing are both getting better as it moves along. You can definitely tell the difference if you read the first chapter then this one, very much improved. Keep up the work.
Interesting people whether good or bad characters --and the
lives they lead sure are NOT boring! Looking forward to
Ch. 7.