All Comments on 'The Perfect Species'

I REALLY ENJOYED THIS STORY,,,A GREAT READ...THANK U..MORE PLEASE AND SOON...LOL

a delightful lightearted tale....well done

Please continue with the further adventures of Kurt and Marella. The way he and she relate to others could be funny and exciting.

Hello everybody, mythtrav16 (the author) here just to say thank you to everybody who have posted a comment here, or sent me an email. A lot of people have been sending me messages asking about a sequel, but I am sorry to say that I have no immediate plans to continue the adventures of Kurt and Marella, as I am working on a larger project at the moment. Perhaps I might revisit these characters in the future, but for now, "The Perfect Species" is a standalone story... sorry.

This tale is a delightful rendering of the age-old "genie" story. I liked it!

-- KK in Texas

Hi Trav

Great start to another story. Will be waiting with great excitement for the next story of the search for Marella's sisters.

Your fan

Barney1944

I'm a huge fan of sci-fi/fantasy stories. This one didn't not disappoint. I loved it!!!! My computer had problems keeping up with me when I went to switch to the next part of the story, I was so enthralled by the story. Keep up the good work! And I hope to see more stories, and maybe even a sequel to this story, in the future!!!

I enjoyed this a lot. Hope to see more please!

Great Stroy!!! Please continue with it!!!

Most, if not ALL of the 'genie' stories are left unfinished without an end. Sometimes they have dozens of chapters but no ending which leaves me VERY frustrated, so I must say thank you for giving the community at least 1 finished genie story (it sucks because I like them them the most, I think).

Loved it- so complete in all aspects

thankx for an arousing read !

jack

That was one of the best stories ive ever had the pleasure of reading! Itd be great if you made a second chapter and talked more about how Marella adapted to the 21st century and and how their life changed.

I love reading stories about where a guy, perferably teenage or lower 20's, finds an object does something to it and out comes an absolutly beautiful woman that can grant wishes then their adventures filled with sex wishing ad of course romance i wish you hadnt stopped there and kept going but oh well thank you for writing it

Personally I would like to hear more about the other guy. Like a story about his life before the genies, how he found them, his life with the genie's that he's acquired them and all the other stuff in between.

wonder what would happen if a woman or young girl found one of the gems?if she was straight or gay. about 95% of the genie stories is about guys finding one.

Note: 85% of the statistics on the internet are made up. ;-)

have Marella create the perfect size and color gem to fit in the broach for Mrs. Devaraux?

Best "genie" story I've read in a while!

You must continue this story or write more with similar characters!

This story is delightful. A real five-star show!

Who wouldn't be blessed to have a "Marella" in his life, even if she didn't have magical powers? Stunningly beautiful, affectionate, playful, intuitive, loyal, and empathetic...Truly a female gem herself!

Kurt was ONE LUCKY DUDE!

Thanks for the creative twist

re the collector:. As aggressive as Kurt and Marella are, how does one man provide enough cosmic life force for all of the ladies in his home?

Really great story mythtrav, I read this same one on xnxx a year or so ago and it has multiple chapters-it still stands out in my mind as unparalleled. Please find the rest of the story and repost it here. Also, taking credit for other people's work is in very poor taste, and often illegal. Do better bud.

OH, I want one!!

Great story!!! Would have made a great series...