All Comments on 'The Perfect Storm'

Right now, lets finish the story.

It would make for a good story if the rest of the family couldn't make it out to the cabin until the end of the vacation, and the two at the cabin were stranded for the week. I think that they would become very close to each other, and the brother spills the story about his cheating on his wife while stuck in Cleveland gets back to his wife.......Rich

I know there's more coming, don't be long on an update.

if you plan to finish it. I don't see it as incest because they aren't blood relatives. Do you plan to at least let them have some kind of sexual experience? I just can't rate it very highly so far!

and a nasty bad comment. I gave it a 5

I don't think I even want to read part 2 Shes just a slut and he is a cuck bitch no wonder him and his wife is having a dry spell shes fucking other men and saying she is working the sister in law is a fucking slut who thinks cause her husband is cheating on her she can cheat on him the sister in law her husband and the brother in law and more than likely the brother in laws wife but at least the 3 all deserve to fucking die like all cheaters and cuck bitches deserve