by randallangdon
Don't stop now!
What a tease.....
There's about six ways his could go, all of them fun
Great, natural story-telling with a powerful and realistic theme. Keep it coming ( or should that be cuming?).
I think the part where he actually started sucking her toes and making love should have been longer. It all happened too fast.
I gave this a 5 for effort and content and to help offset the asshole of Lit's comment
I can't find a reason to comment on an 8 year old story that never was finished. Sorry.
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