All Comments on 'The Perfect Wife'

Cuck crap.

Even for fantasy that was a pile of manure WTF!!!!! Non Erotic nonsense

Okay. I don't have a problem with loving wife stories. But really? You drag out every racist trick in the book. She suddenly becomes a black cock lovin' slut in the middle of her rape. Nobody in the mall notices that a knife-wielding man is abducting a woman in the freaking food court? Her rape wasn't reported to the police? Her family wasn't told that she was raped?

So what happened at the in-laws? Are the sisters into black dick? What happened? Another typical white beauty going for the black dick. C'mon let us know the rest?

The comments will not be kind.

They should have negative numbers when voting for crap like this.

nobody gets wise when he gets old, he just gets older, sicker dumber, you name it.

Hmm. Non-con may have been better.

I can understand a religious person not believing in abortion, even after a rape, but failing to use the 'morning after' pill?

The title says it all!

The topic was iffy, but the real problem was the writing. This story had little to offer other than some guys masturbation dream. No characters, no thought, no reason for the behavior of anyone in the story. And really no conclusion.

Work on the writing.

Not worth reading. Nigger rapes wife - wife enjoys it mor than sex wiht her husband- slut wife get knocked up and wont abort then has two nigger bastard babies. White spineless husbands licks niggers sperm out of her panties I bet he would have sucked the niggers balls while he was cumming in his whore wifes skanky cunt. Any real white man would have killed both the nigger and the skanky wife. It ws not rape ite was a set up

i hav been fantazing about gettig rpaed by a big black guy like that for years but of course i would be so willing just acting like i did not want it, such a turn on, i am tied so no reason to worry about kids, would not want husband along to hear me go crazy tho, hope u will tell more of this so much

could have happend before babies arrived

I'm voting 5 stars for this because most everyone will hate it. Most of those lurking on this site never submit a story, they just sound off. Well, steviecom...this one's for you!

Such a turn on getting a big black cock forced on you like that in a mall parking lot how can it get any hotter than that, evry white woman's dream

iam sure she called him back and begged him for more and more, maybe met him at her house in her own bed so hot please continues this one, and i loved ur other stories also on the beach, my panties were in a wad also like hers

puke - glad we did not bother to read this manure, just follow the comments and the story is exposed to show how badly it is written or just another nigger/skank pile of piss.

How about a 1* for your idiotic comment. Only low life like you would enjoy such a non-erotic story. Very few stories on this site deserve five stars and to give this dribble of crap that, shows your total ignorance of what good erotica is all about. Unlike the likes of you, the so called haters at least know the meaning of the word "erotica".

Why don't you two black loving whores take a hike down the ghetto and make your fantasy happen. I can see the headlines, "two white whores fucked to death in alley".

Both had a beer bottle shoved up their well used cunt. How's that for a fantasy?

I love it when people rag on a story and won't even leave a user name. That's not a review..that's being a coward. If you don't like the story don't read it...or go to a Disney site and be happy.

Curious - what plant are you really from or did you forget to take your meds?

Unless your name really is loboss2, you also are commenting anonymously. I suggest you show some real courage and leave your actual name and address with your next comment, if you dislike anonymity so much.

one anyone that is forced or rape and doesn't press charges is worthless

two she allowed it to happen again and knew she was pregnant and kept them.

the man should have left and dumped her ass the minute she even thought of meeting them again and shot him. I would have hunted him down and blew his nuts off cause no man forces another person. They are pussies if they do and deserve to be killed.

If a man forced himself on my wife he signed his death wish and would end up dead.

The basic idea that two adults could be kidnapped while at a table in a mall, is pretty much not believable. But the rest of it, especially how the wife reacted to her rapist is, for me, a total turn-on. That her husband became an instant wimpy cuck made me smile. I only wish the story went on to say how she gave in to her need to continue as a black cock slut by calling her rapist, now lover, and continuing to be his white married slut. For me, that would be the logical sequence for her. Of course hubby would also continue his clean-up duties. Oh yeah!!!

I enjoyed this story. I hope there are more chapters to follow. After all, he did give her his number and hopefully she didn't get pregnant the first time. It would be interesting to see her making time for her new lover at the expense of family time.

I had a quick look at the comments and at least three people enjoyed it, so how can I knock it? Well I'll tell you how it was for me.

Amazingly, this story has the tag 'seduced!' There are in fact lots of black men out there who are charismatic seducers and I suppose I was hoping to find one in this story. Unfortunately, this 'charmer' turned out to be a stereotypical black, knife-wielding, rapist thug.

There were some plus points though. I like the theme in which the 'conservative, reluctant married white woman gets seduced by handsome, charming black man, has his baby, the husband forgives her infidelity and stands by her. Part of that theme is portrayed here. Dismally, the all important seduction was not

The first few paragraphs would make a good tail-end of a long-ish story. The rest of it an unpleasant rape that the lady unconvincingly enjoyed

Not my thing. Thankfully, it was little over a page long

Another gay white man cums out of the closet, it had to take his wife fucking a black man to do it..

Have you told your mummy and daddy that you like drinking nigger sperm lol

I found the mall abduction and subsequent too far fetched. As for some of the readers having rape fantasies, you might give that a second or third thought. As a nurse I have taken care of rape patients. One in particular stays with me. She went out on New Years Eve to get some cigarettes. She ended up getting raped, robbed and severely beaten. It looked like the guy was trying to kill her. She had some broken ribs, a broken nose, a gash above her eye requiring stitches and a broken orbital bone. She had blood in her hair, down her neck and then down her arm. The guy had kicked her repeatedly.

One would think if she loved the black cock fucking she got so much, she would have used his phone number and had more sex with her black stranger-lover. For sure now that she's had his babies she needs to invite him over to meet his twin sons and give her all the black cock she craves and needs.

plenty of statistics about the reality of black-on-white crime: in US unlike in England these stats give ethnicity by race of perpetrator against race of victim. The rate of black-on-white crime exceeds white-on-black crime by 40:1 -- by analysis by head of population. But here we get the orthodox Literotica take on this which is of course the white wife ends up gagging for it and they don't even get an abortion after the obvious rape. And then there are the commentators who obviously get off on what is obviously a crime. For a white male this is quite chilling really.

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It amazes me the morons who read these stories and respond as if they are true. Come on guys! This is fiction. It really didn't happen so relax. It is a well written story about a guy enjoying is wife having black babies. If this isn't your cup of tea then don't read it. One guy took it so seriously he started quoting crime statistics. Unbelievable! I have never figured out why anyone reads stories that they find offensive? I skip all those myself. And I don't have to read the entire thing before I know if it is offensive to me or not. If cuckold tales bother you then don't read them. It is really pretty simple. Go read about your particular interest or fetish and I promise not to come there and write a bunch of dumb criticisms just because it isn't my fetish.

my ex was nigger raped they been mattied 3 years now

Where’s the rest of the story?

Aftermath/divorce?

And

Her side

Lacking! r "Stupid" either or, take your pick.

Fantasize about my wife and I being out and a group of black guys get us in a position where we can’t get away. I think about her being raped but each of them and having orgasms. Even though I know it happens against her will it still excites me to see her cum from blackmen fucking her so hard and treating her like a whore. I can’t help her and they laugh at me getting hard but I can’t help it. She becomes tired and stops resisting letting them do whatever they want until they’re done with her. They take her license for our address and take pictures on their cells. I can always tell when they’ve been there. She’s used to 3 to 5 guys coming over now and I find her worn out on our bed.

Well written, enjoyable and realistic story. I love licking BBC cum from my Wife's pussy. We have two mixed race children from different fathers and dearly love them both.

Deserves a part 2 for sure.

This has to be the worst interracial 'love' story, on this site. He needs to get a .357 and end the asshole's misery. " Bang- Bang, my baby shot me down".

Love these stories, white wife being broken in and finding out she’s to weak to protect herself from a dominant Blackman. He husband recognizes he can’t stand up to him either hides and listens to his wife being humiliated, used and debased. The first of many times as she cums from being used as a whore. There’s no way she can get away from the truth.

Would like to read if she contacted him for more sex. Found out she was preggo and wanted more.

I Really loved it, always wanted my wife to have a black baby and push the Stroller thru WalMart. 10 stars for the author. Reminds me of back when I had a black Roommate just so he could fuck my 18 yr old HS Senior Cheerleader and knock her up. The first night we were sitting in the living room and he rushes in to take a whiz obviously from drinking beer. I suggest to my Gal that she take her top and Bra off and go help him aim as we could hear him Whizzing in the bathroom. She took her top and bra off and ran into the bath room with her Double Dee's Bouncing and grabbed his dick. A few minutes later they were fucking in the living room. When suddenly I got cold feet and checked her fertility sked and realized she should be ovalating today and asked them to stop. They did and he went to his room and she and I went to mine. We talked about her having a black baby and we both decided that we wanted her to have one and she went into his room. He was concerned I might interrupt again so he didn't waist anytime screwing her the second time. I ran out to my car to get another pack of smokes and I could hear her Coming as he came inside her. She came back to me and we made love, but I wouldn't come in her. Then I sent her back in his room for the rest of the night. One of the hottest nights of my life.

Truly horrible.

My ex had a black daughter, now the daddy, a Tennessee trooper is pimp for them both

Za dużo wulgaryzmów i wyzwisk a poza tym opowiadanie dobre . My wraz z moją młodą wówczas żoną [ 21 lat ] w czasie miesiąca miodowego poznaliśmy wielkiego , kruczoczarnego ochroniarza w hotelu , w którym mieszkaliśmy . Jest od mojej żony i 22 lata starszy i mamy od niego trójkę czarnych jak ich on dzieci . Jesteśmy z nim w cuckoldzie ponad 10 lat i to na życzenie mojej żony , która uwielbia jego ogromnego , grubego czarnego chuja i wielkie pełne afrykańskiej spermy jądra . On rucha mi żonę często . Nasz najmłodszy syn ma 3 lata i teraz murzyn pracuje nad czwartym dzieckiem . Kocham moja żonę i wspieram ją podczas krycia murzyna . często też wylizuję jego juks z pipki mojej żony .

Uhhh.... ever heard of Plan B? Nicely written but stupid, pointless story. Could have been interesting if he had asked her to get Plan B ("Morning After pill") and she refused. Good sequel would be him divorcing her over 'infidelity' albeit was a rape, BUT the Plan B refusal. THAT would have made it interesting. As it is, crap story.