All Comments on 'The Perfect Woman'

Please let me know what you thought. Feedback is important so I know whether or not I should keep doing these thanks

A work dream cum true! Nice story, nice buildup. 5 stars! Love to read more.

Thank you very much for the kind words it was fun writing it and it was even more fun wishing it was true. That's the first time I've written a story that is basically all fiction but based on a real woman that I know who pretty much looks like the girl I wrote about, but by no means have I ever been lucky enough. But that doesn't mean I didn't think about it just like the guy in the story.

Loved this story and it is rare to see Indian interracial stories.

To spitball future ideas for stories maybe you can emphasise the cultural and racial aspect more?

Also as a personal kink would love to see light bdsm and more dirty talk. Lived this keep going :)

I already have the beginnings of some ideas for the Further Adventures of these two people with possible addition of a college friend of Priya's named Elspeth

Elspeth comes to visit.....

I just realized my last update only said that it was uploaded when it's been posted for a while I would love for some of you to read this let me know what you think under part 2. It's also listed in the category erotic couplings

Lovely premise.

Nice buildup. But the sex, when it's happening moves ahead too quickly. Lacks details.

What did he pussy look like (besides perfect)? Shaved? Hairy? Manicured?

What about her breasts? No involvement? Why?

What about her ass? He drools over it when she's in pants. Nothing when it's naked in front of him? She doesn't want him to show her how much he's in love with it? She doesn't ask him if he fantasizes about it when he's jerking off? What does he think about? What does he dream of doing to it? Why doesn't she show him her asshole? Why doesn't she have him worship it?

Four stars for what could have been.

I appreciate the feedback. This two-part series was the first fictitious story I've ever written. I was concentrating very hard on getting the point across but also on trying to make the dialogue grammatically correct and so forth or else they don't even publish it. You're right I could have gotten a more detailed about certain things but I also was trying to cut to the chase to some degree. But I could have given a lot more detailed descriptions of her specific parts so to speak. I'll take that under advisement if I ever do a part 3 or if I write another story that is completely out of my head. It's been a while since I published anything. Because a lot of them are just recounts of personal activity. And while it seems to have a decent feedback and response there isn't a whole lot of variation I can give to the whole estim situation at this point that I haven't already explained a lot. That said there are always variations and your suggestions here suggest no pun intended, more variations