All Comments on 'The Perils Of Lynn 213'

Good story and the science fiction was solid.

Simple yet effective concepts which make for a promising sci-fi erotic story.

Can't wait for what's next!

- Mr X.

Please do continue.

Enjoyed it, hope you choose to continue it.

This story has so much promise!! I enjoyed the way you have explored several themes in such a short piece of writing, and I can see so much more scope for you to explore. Please return to this piece of work and finish the story of Lynn 213.

I really enjoyed this! I'm a bit sad to see that it's been so long without a follow up. I'd very much like to see where the story goes from here. REALLY loved that whole notion of "the strong enslaved by the weak".