All Comments on 'The Pet Girl Shoppe'

by Sarahcheer

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Well done

Another well written story , good background on each individual girl .

Details into the society of pony girls and puppy girls was done well .

Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
long time waiting

It has been a while since i have seen a story by my favorite author but it was definitely worth the wait

rbennerbenneover 14 years ago
Well Written

Sarahcheer you have definitely become my favourite author. All your stories are well written this one is also a very original work and being larger than most of your other stories I found the character development fascinating. I look forward to your next story.

DryhillDryhillalmost 13 years ago
GOOD STORY

There is no doubt a longer story does allow more time for proper characterization and this story has that plus wonderful clear descriptions thereby allowing the reader to feel they are there if not actually taking part in the action.

bondagescholarbondagescholaralmost 12 years ago
Great job - I hope you continue to write in this area...

I liked the futuristic theme and the bold approach you used. You capture the perspective and feelings of the petgirls well. The devices and training methods you invented are quite creative and exciting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Don't switch tenses. It's very distracting and unprofessional.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
a sequal please

I would love a sequal to this, or the candice and sarah portion. Loved that and the rest too. Thanks

LeafheadLeafheadalmost 2 years ago

Amazingly real . Alternate reality so fun. Pleeeze more. Thank u so much.

petgirl1212petgirl12128 months ago

I would be a Julie and have myself converted into a cute little puppy girl. I would rather be fully naked and not in a bitch suit but as a pet the choice is out of my hands.

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36, f, college grad (BS and MS). Active as a ponygirl and writer as well as training slaves. I own my own clip and image series store: http://www.clips4sale.com/32519 and http://www.images4sale.com/32519 It would be nice if you would go on over after reading and voting on ...