All Comments on 'The Pet'

Very well done. In a couple of places, though, there are redundancies: I think you mention at least three times that he starts sucking her nipple, for example. Also, you say that he is a virgin, but at the end of the story you describe their sex as the most passionate of his life. Well, it would be, wouldn't it? No basis for comparison.

However, in general you write quite well and it's a good story.