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All Comments on 'The Phantom of Lakefield Manor'

by MaskedWhispers

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gordo12gordo12over 6 years ago
Far too rushed

This isn't even one full page on literotica. You need to flesh out your plot with a lot more information and action. 2*

MaskedWhispersMaskedWhispersover 6 years agoAuthor
@gordo12

thanks for the feedback! I'm just starting, will try to make the next chapter a bit longer!

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 6 years ago
Beautiful story of love

All aunts and nephews should experience such uninhibited love

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