All Comments on 'The Phantom Pilot Ch. 06'

Great read, love the action. Keep it up. =)

Great composition skills, wonderfull and original plot, good characters! I do hope your muse will move you in the direction of a concluding phase to finish this real treat of a story.

Thanks!

you cant leave me hanging like this common

If you're still active, you have to continue writing this. It's really good and I've sat

here reading it for the last 4 hours. This has a great storyline, and a lot of potential.

I don't know how long you've planned this to be or if you're even working on it anymore but if its short, we need to learn more about Walker's past. Just a small bit. Perhaps that 'small bit' that entices me into continously reading for these 4 hours is enough until a chapter or two.

You've had really good character development during the whole story so far, and the plot makes sense within the story. I feel that Walker should be more distressed with the situation he's been thrown in, but perhaps he doesn't have time to think because he's occupied by so much?

This story is thrilling, it keeps me on edge and makes me want to read more. Bookmarked.

Enjoyable read but disappointed that the story is unfinished. More would be welcomed. Thank you

It's heartbreaking that this story ends here. It's so interesting and full of likeable characters. So much potential.