by TheTalkMan
Kind of feel like you skipped over the twins, feelings like you missed on something there.
Hey great story as usual. By any chance does the witch from your other stories is responsible for ruining Jesse?
Really fine job giving each woman , their own unique carnal appeal and personal characteristics. I never fully bought into Grandma as being the pinnacle of carnal appeal, but TheTalkMan made a valiant effort to make it so.
My other nitpick would have been Jesse being outed to gf so early in installment but looking at Oddessey that he embarked upon, it makes twisted sense. As per always I loved the earnest exploration morphing into satirical musings on the dark side of female nature.
Where did the first end and 2nd begin ? Dunno but I owe this author much thanks for taking his stories to the proverbial next level. *****
Did you say Jesse had two other aunts and other female cousins in Chapter 1?
Will they be introduced and fucked by Jesse in the Epilogue?
congrats to you man im truly a fan of your work and wish it wouldn't end . your story is like a good starwars book I have to read it over and over again
Soooo...awaiting the fabulous fourth in this fine family fuck fest...anxiously!!!
Please, please.... more! Awesome, awesome story and it deserves to live on!!
this was just amazing better than everything else although most of the authors recent work is really good. I wish there was more.
The universe you have created reminds me of the marvel movies and now I'm waiting for you to bring all of your characters together in one huge crossover incest orgy!
Having read your other stories I had a feeling the grandma was going to win this one. Even so, she ended up eating a lot of screentime compared to the other women. Shame.
I have to say this deprave sexual roller coaster has been an incredible ride!! And i for one truly cant wait to read on abt Jesse impregnating each of his relatives and even mayb an epilogue later on about him doing his granddaughters as well! Also maybe add in the dad finding out!
But even more than that, i cant wait to get a more detailed account of him doing the twins the next time!!!!!
You don't disappoint. Just love this type of kink.
Why have you never tried to write a corruption of the superhero, where this sort of thing really fits or a father/twin daughter stories ?
Kendra and Jessi fucking in the woods always gets me off! So fucking good!!!
...but I really think he should've ended up with his mother. Mother-son incest is, for me, the most powerful and depraved type of incest.
But a good story nonetheless.
Jesse is weak and dumb. He never put his foot down and say no while he is dragged by the women of his family. They all fight for him so he has the upper hand but no, he just obeys like a dumb shit. A true stud doesn't get dominated.
The story started with an alfa male and you turnd him into a cowerdly wimp. Do you hate men? One star.
This was a really good story. I see many commenters are complaining that Jesse wasn't acting sufficiently alpha and he turned wimpy which is ridiculous because at no point in the story did he demonstrate any dominant tendencies. There are plenty of harem stories with dominant male leads on this site if you don't like it.
This series is actually good but why did you make the main character seem like just a piece of meat to all of the women in his family. I couldn't really get into the stories simply because the women are constantly trying to dominate and possess him.
More on the Phillips family!! Great job what happened after the epilogue!! What about the rest of the sisters??
This is easily one of the best erotica stories I've read! There wasn't a single moment from the start till the end where I didn't look forward to keep reading. Thank you for making this masterpiece and for the laughs and excitement you have given me. Much Love <3
love this story; definitely one of my favourite ones of yours. I would love it if you continue with this, this time though, with Jesse now being the dominant one, going from one female family member to another with the intent to seduce them, fuck them and breed them.
Truely outstanding story. Self-realization and acceptance without the slighest guilt is how humans are meant to exist. Because of a lack of experience/knowledge, for Jesse to have settled for his less than sexually, mentally and emotionally desirable girlfriend would eventually have lead to disaster. After having experienced sexually knowledgeable, mature women, he could never be satisfied with his frigid, sexually immature college girlfriend. It would be the same as marrying the first woman a man had sexual relations with. I would love to see this series continue because I would like to see the ramifications of his impragnating all the female members of his family and how they relate to each other.
I really liked the start of the story but unfortunately it became a bit too repetitive and the sex almost felt dull especially when you wouldn't go in detail what kinky things the twins did.