by Lady_Jess7015
Very well done for someone "a bit shy about sharing my writing." Looking forward to the next chapter. S^3
Very well-written. I'm definitely intrigued. I'll look forward to the next chapter.
I liked this vignette. Bit on a shorter side to call it a chapter, but — short/flash stories are fun to read.
I liked the name — Aislin, very different name. Not read a story here that has this name.
Good job.