All Comments on 'The Philosophy of Sex Ch. 02'

Good continuation, but it was a bit rushed. The title is — "Philosophy of sex" What you should've done was — made it a bit slower. Like say — he teaches her to give a blowjob. Then after a couple of days or maybe after a week — he introduces her with the pleasure of sex.

I'm not sure if there'll be more chapter(s), but I'd love to read more. Good job though.

Thank you for your feedback! I hadn't considered the teaching aspect, and the title was just sort of tacked on at the end--I was never good with titles.

But I will take your feedback into consideration for my next submissions. This was the last part of this particular series, but in the future I may write something similar that will be longer and more drawn out. If you would like to send me ideas I would be more than happy to take them, and of course credit you in the story!

Hope to hear from you soon:

Lady_Jess7015