All Comments on 'The Phoenix Ch. 01'

Great start, I am looking forward to chapter 2

I AM LOVING THIS. PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON. Fantastic writing.

Very descriptive, excellent flow. Well paced and not rushed. That being said .....girl hurry up with the next chapter....this is great. LOL

I like the way you're developing the characters.... it shows a lot of forethought.

I am so glad to see you back. You did an excellent job with the storyline and the character development. Can't wait to see how this works out.

Already looking forward to Ch. 2.

I love Erin and the Wyatt is a sweetheart. Patiently (impatiently) waiting for the next installment 😊

WOW !!! Great start. I'm already hooked. Finally something new to read . Can't wait to read more. :D

This is writing at it's finest. Damn good beginning chapter.

This story just sucked me in from the beginning. The characters seem real and relatable and we are instantly rooting for Erin and her family. I love the story line. You don't see too many women marine vet stories and this one seems like it'll be awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter. You really did a great job on this one. :)

-p2p-

Five.

just a thing after 6yrs and 3 tours she should have been a higher rank than pvt. lance cpl, or maybe sgt.

Great start I really like the Erin and Wyatt characters. Please post more soon as its really good and I enjoyed the start!

Love NikkixJx

Great story, but seriously, get a new editor. Lots of punctuation and grammar errors.

service revolver? when did they start bringing revolvers back into the service?

I hope you add a new chapter soon. I really enjoyed this beginning. Please don't make us wait long!

This has to be the first story I've come across with the protagonist being a female veteran. I'm all for it.

with this story. Plot, Setting, characters I sincerely hope this story gets finished would be a shame to leave this one out there unfinished.

Love it already, very unique

I LOOOOOOOVE THIS STORY OH MY GAHD! LOIVE IT DON'T STOP!! :O

Love this new series; hopefully you will update soon. If not, Merry Christmas & Happy New Year.

Annabelle

Only just found this story, but think its a winner too!

You have a talent, don't let anyone tell you anything different! Take your time and update when you completely have each chapter together. I would rather wait on good quality work, than YOU rush and give us readers bad quality work any day! 5 stars I wish I could give you more!