All Comments on 'The Phoenix Ch. 03'

I do apologize for the lack of breaks in the submission. We sent it in different format and I guess the boarders we put in got taken out (except the one after the Authors Note, oddly enough). I d hope it didn't ruin the story for you. I will try to prevent that from happening again.

Thanks

-Kat

Perfect....I wish there were more.

Glad to see back.

Lovely chapter.

Wyatt's dad sure is an asshole. What caused his dad to become an alcoholic?

Five.

From the laughs I let loose at the hard time Morgan gave them when she caught them, to the insanely touching way you ended this chapter...LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!

Not one bit of sex and yet im so hooked omg i am in loooove with this >.<

This story is just beautiful. Your writing is very on point and deliberate; I love it.

Wow, unconventional, I love this love story, hope you come back soon with more chapters.

This is my favorite story please update soon!

This story is just love. Can't wait for more.

I have only read one other story like this! Anytime I can read a story that keeps my attention this long and there has been no sex in it so far. That is some Damn Good Writing! You deserve 10 stars

I can not wait to read more of this story and see more of your other projects in the works!

Awesome writing hand down keep the good work

This is the sweetest storyline; just lovely. Thank you Phoenix.

Continue this story! We've waited so long

coomeee ooonnn

It's almost been two years, at least be kind enough to let us know what's going on...

Lovely story but it would have been nice to have had it completed. Oh, well, another disappointing author.

You know what? Sometimes people are so crude. This is a volunteer site. Negative comments are so common.

You have a great story here. I figured the rest was up to our imagination. So often the negative comments are also from Anonymous. I haven't submitted any stories. I read, I like, or I don't. Why bash someone who had the courage to post something. Baffling.