All Comments on 'The Phoenix of Fa'alak Ch. 01'

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Kristofe about 8 years ago

Wonderful

Different but wonder all the same. Fantasy nearly lends itself to BDSM and you wove them together beautifully.

Anonymousabout 8 years ago

Well written

Thoroughly enjoyed it looking forward for more.

chixjinxbdsm about 8 years ago

Oh my God

Only you could glue the two concepts of fantasy and BDSM in the manner you did.

In love with this... We write, you transport ...

And I absolutely love the way you play with words that one wouldnt think of.

Awaiting more desperately.

Anonymousabout 8 years ago

Loved the beginning of this story

more please

CrimsonPen1342 over 7 years ago

Why are we not funding this?

Really well written story, and loved tha way reading it calls of a mix of a world somewhere between Game of Thrones & Lord of the Rings. Right down to the almost Elvish-sounding OC names. definitely worth follow up chapters. Ya made characters w/ personal histories to them that could springboard into many an (erotic based) off-branching fic. WTG..pub. :-) 🖊📖👍

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