The Phoenix of Fa'alak Ch. 01

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And, still, he moved within me, my breath whimpering as I licked and nipped at his neck. His back hunched, he licked a trail down to my breasts, his tongue teasing my nipples to enflamed life.

"Oh, good Goddess," he groaned against my breasts, "let go, Mate. Give over to it."

From deep within, the waves began, moving outward like a storm on the deadliest seas to crash over us both. For the first time in my life, I orgasmed, releasing with a yell more terrible than the most awful noises I EVER made in the field of battle.

I felt within me what felt as if his cock were spasming; then, his harsh shout joined the echo of mine as he emptied into me. My maiden vessel was filled.

He stood, lifted me, sat upon his throne, and settled me there on his lap. As our movements became more languid and our breathing returned to normal, he wrapped my neck with several braids of black bull leather.

The strands felt tight, but not tight enough to choke me. I looked up at him, quizzical. "It is your collar, the proof of my ownership of you. We are mated, now."

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To be continued...

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CrimsonPen1342CrimsonPen1342over 7 years ago
Why are we not funding this?

Really well written story, and loved tha way reading it calls of a mix of a world somewhere between Game of Thrones & Lord of the Rings. Right down to the almost Elvish-sounding OC names. definitely worth follow up chapters. Ya made characters w/ personal histories to them that could springboard into many an (erotic based) off-branching fic. WTG..pub. :-) ๐Ÿ–Š๐Ÿ“–๐Ÿ‘

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Loved the beginning of this story

more please

chixjinxbdsmchixjinxbdsmalmost 8 years ago
Oh my God

Only you could glue the two concepts of fantasy and BDSM in the manner you did.

In love with this... We write, you transport ...

And I absolutely love the way you play with words that one wouldnt think of.

Awaiting more desperately.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Well written

Thoroughly enjoyed it looking forward for more.

KristofeKristofealmost 8 years ago
Wonderful

Different but wonder all the same. Fantasy nearly lends itself to BDSM and you wove them together beautifully.

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