All Comments on 'The Phoenix of Fa'alak Ch. 02'

All of it is so detailed and well written. I feel like I'm right there in the room, experiencing it. Can't wait for Chapter 3!

Intense i agree

Also captivating and engrossing. I felt like I was Fa'alak. Thats how good you have written for anyone to connect with her.

This is pure delight and i want more....so much more....

Intense I agree

Also captivating and engrossing

I felt like I was Fa'alak. Thats how god you have written for anyone to connect themselves to her.

More more more...

Even better than part one. MORE!

Must say, I'm in agreement w/ tha other reviewers thus far, only down side really, being the relative shortness of the chapter. As far as the actual writing however, every bit as great as chap 1. Ya seem to have a knack for conveying the raw emotional states of your character in a way that is very broadly easy for a reader t empathize w/ them while reading. Also, Pub...really love tha cliffhangers..lol

Many a reader may just want a plush er...kings throne for xmas this year..lmao

CP :-)