All Comments on 'The Phoenix of Fa'alak Ch. 03'

Loved this series. So detailed and well written. That binding scene. WOW. everything you write is fantastic. Can't wait to read more

Yes, this is the FINAL entry of Phoenix. I do have a new long-running series in the works that will eventually be highly episodic that begins tomorrow, but this is the very last chapter of Phoenix.

I cried! It was so damned good... there was so much love... without the word being used. Thats the sign ofa great writer - to convey emotions without the word....

Love you

Respect 👐

😙

for effort an content and to say fuck you asshole of LIT. Dear annony only holds his own tit!!! Just an old ugly fag trying to look and sound bad ass. He has a bad ass OK but that's because he shit himself.

An excellent finale to this tale! Thank you so very much for it.

In the last week I have read all your stories and loved them all looking forward to more coming ,keep up the excellent work

I really enjoyed this story! Great writing! :)

MastersWench xx

LOVED this..lol

and that's coming from a lady who isn't per say overly into BDSM as a whole...but...this may give me ideas. Also say something of love at the end, where even for all her power as a fire-breather, Desine'aa showed control for it out of her love for him.

Outstandingly written, Pub...really enjoyed this! :-)