All Comments on 'The Photo Shoot'

WOW.....................

I was expecting a story I could identify with... I do not like stories that use 'you' as the subject. This could have been a GREAT story, but the way it's written limits the audience to those who want to be the 'you'. I have a 'hard' time seeing myself as a hot dripping female.... sorry!

I'm not female, so have difficulty reading a story that speaks to the reader as he was a woman. Good story line, just don't put the reader in the story, I don't like feeling like I'm the one getting stuffed. I gave it a two!

Thank you for your honest comments. This is how we learn and improve our writing skills. Yes I wrote it as "Me", but the story was for a specific person, so I just went with it. But I appreciate all of your comments, and I hope I will be able to take the next step to make my stories a better and more enjoyable read.