All Comments on 'The Photographer'

why did you stop half way thru?

Almost like a guy wrote this. Seduction is supposed to be savored, like a fine wine, not gulped like cheap beer.

The story was off to a good start but died abruptly in the end. Perhaps we will see part 2 soon.

Quick ending no one has aquised me of that before, but I'm no writer.

Marvelled at you choice of cock, not the 9" size of a coke can model. Girl friend you know how to make a guy feel good.

Thanks.

as a bi female I found the story so hot, my panties were soon removed and I came at the same time as Melissa.

Oh it was really well written, as well thank yo

Very sexy. Perhaps a paragraph or two at the end about the aftermath of the photoshoot? Post-coitus, so to speak...