All Comments on 'The Pianist Ch. 01'

nice intro. please continue

Off to read chapter two now. :)

I like your style of writing. This chapter was quite short though. I haven't read the other chapters but maybe combining them would be better.

Love your style of writing. It\\\'s a little short though but thats o.k.

Poor Allie doesn't realise if she can't make it in corporate America, there;s no way she'll make it as a teacher. It's far more high pressure to have people's future in your hands and their parents and the media at your back than a bit of money and a single boss. Plus, teaching is harder and a thousand times more complex than it looks. This is why teaching has the highest drop out rate of any profession in Australia and a scheme to retrain people from the corporate world into teaching has utterly, utterly failed. As one Harvard lecturer said "teaching isn't rocket science- it's much, much harder".

"He scanned her body. She was curvy, with an ample rack." Sounds like a charmer. Definitely a misogynist jerk I want to read more about (heavy sarcasm). And then there's this: "A smile cracked at the corner of his mouth, as he wondered what made this woman so upset." She's upset and he's smiling? Done with your writing.

Disagree and agree.

That he appreciates her physical appearance is not being a misogynist.

That word is so overused here.

That he smiles because she is upset is being a jerk.